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― Artistic Expression Critique ⇒ 'Waitin' on Forrest Gump' (Composite)

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Re: 'Waitin' on Forrest Gump' (Composite)

Post by PietFrancke » Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:11 pm

I like big moon where you have it too, I think it addresses some of the lighting issues - it allows you to keep the lighting! Very cool work Dave
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Post by Psjunkie » Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:31 pm

davechinn wrote: ↑
Wed Nov 13, 2019 3:21 pm
 Thoughts, is this in anyway an improvement?
Most definitely Dave..well done
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Post by Duck » Fri Nov 15, 2019 1:13 am

I like the reworked version. It definitely provides more of a sense of 'place' without sacrificing the overall mood. Well done.
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Post by davechinn » Sat Nov 16, 2019 12:05 pm

Thanks Minnie, Piet, Frank & Duck !!! I appreciate the feedback, it's always good to know that I CAN get on the right track. It just takes a little longer with me.
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